Well, this is one a lot of writers I’ve read are guilty of. We use well-known clichés because it’s easy. So, today’s task is nice and simple; find some other ways of making a comparison that doesn’t resort to the old favourites. I have to try and get my class to do this all the time, as half of them keep using the same-old clichés they’ve read and heard everywhere and the other half can’t even write a simile yet.
But I digress. A writer can give their characters clichés to say. In fact, a writer should, because we all speak in clichés, whether we realise it or not. Admittedly, some are becoming a little archaic, but that’s no reason not to use them. However, when faced with that wonderful description that I enjoy so much, there is little reason to use clichés. If, as a writer, you can’t find a better way to describe than using something that’s been used millions of times, then you’d better start expanding your comparative vocabulary.
If you want to know a little more about clichés, have a look at Jeremey’s historical A to Z of clichés. And, although I said you could use clichés for your characters to say, there are some clichés that you just have to avoid on Sage Counsel’s page.
Perhaps my favourite simile ever (although it’s definitely not a cliché but it’s worth sharing) is from ‘Blackadder Goes Forth’. If you’re not familiar, just put it into YouTube!
Private Baldrick: I have a plan, sir.
Captain Blackadder: Really Baldrick? A cunning and subtle one?
Private Baldrick: Yes, sir.
Captain Blackadder: As cunning as a fox who’s just been appointed Professor of Cunning at Oxford University?
Private Baldrick: Yes, sir.
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as hard to find as your car keys when you’re already late
faster than a child down the stairs at the end of the last day of the school year
as slow as a graceful canal boat
pretty as a hedgerow full of wildflowers
white as a fresh Word document page, just waiting for a story
silent as a school classroom during the holidays
cold as an ice lolly fresh from the freezer on a hot day
It’s not as easy as it looks! I think I’d better just go and check I haven’t used any of the tired old clichés in my own writing!
That’s the thing about clichés… We use them without thinking!
(Tasks are taken from The Five-Minute Writer by Margret Geraghty.)
(Painting is by Malcolm Sharp – http://www.malcolmsharp.com)