Monthly Archives: September 2012

Task Thirteen: Turning Stains into Stories

So, this week it’s about finding a pattern in a seemingly random jumble of things. It could be the shape of a stain on a jumper, or the assortment of people standing in a queue. It’s about taking an odd assortment or something that looks strange and making a story from it, finding some kind of normality there.

I have to admit I’ve already written this week’s assignment. No, I didn’t write it ten years ago and it’s been languishing in my drawer ever since, although that would make a good story in itself. Usually I write this little intro and then stop to think about the task. This time, though, I actually jumped the gun a little and, as soon as I’d read the chapter, I chose my words and just wrote!

And I must say, very enjoyable it was, too!

I haven’t really seen myself as a short story writer. However, by doing these tasks I am finding that my ability to write shorter, snappier pieces is developing and I’m feeling rather proud. Yes, I know, pride comes before a fall, but I’m not sure what kind of fall there can be from just publishing short stories on my own blog. There were three lists given on the page for this task, one of people, one of places and one of objects. So I was super-keen to choose and get going on this one. I’m pleased with my ultra-short story! It was written under the pressure of a five-minute timer, although I’ll be honest that I went over by about 3 minutes.

What can I say? I wasn’t finished!

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My three words, chosen at random are: doctor, school and camera.

The doctor sat in the parking lot, in the battered, white station wagon and stared through the windscreen at the pouring rain. She noticed how the water fell onto the glass, the shaped droplets of liquid suddenly becoming a spreading mass, each indistinguishable from the other. It felt good to think about the rain, and not about her son’s indiscretion.

That was what the principal had called it. An indiscretion. Because he hadn’t been discrete about it. Hadn’t even bothered hiding.

She felt her face heat up again, as it had over the phone. She couldn’t face going into the school, to actually meet the stern, un-fatherly figure of her son’s school principal. She knew her face would turn bright red, as though it was her who’d been caught.

I never thought my own son could be so… So what? She couldn’t finish the sentence, even to herself. Sure, she knew growing up in a single-parent family could be hard, but she thought she’d taught her son right from wrong. If she knew it was wrong to poke a camera in the open window of the girls’ changing room to photograph them showering, then why didn’t he?

With a sigh, she turned the ignition and pointed the car towards the high school. What made it worse was that it was her camera he’d borrowed. Heaving a sigh that was both cross and sad all at once, the doctor realised that she’d brought this on herself.

I should never have enrolled on that photography course, she berated herself. When I was telling him about my assignment to photograph the female form, I didn’t think he’d decide to complete the work himself!

She pulled into the high school lot and pulled the car up, blocking in some others, but knowing the owners wouldn’t be trying to move them in the middle of the school day. As she braced herself to leave the car, the pounding rain suddenly stopped and a shaft of bright sunlight seemed to bathe her and her car in a beautiful glow.

But…the assignment deadline is coming up soon and if the photos are any good…

With a new spring in her step, the doctor made her way inside.

(Tasks are taken from The Five-Minute Writer by Margret Geraghty.)


A bit of Royal Mail-bashing

Okay, so just over five weeks ago I sent of some chapter from my book, Discovering Route 66, to a potential agent (see this post). I haven’t heard yet, but when I do I’ll let you know!

Speaking of waiting for things to arrive, I posted a letter to a friend a few weeks ago. I’m not normally one to bash the Royal Mail, but I’m feeling a bit miffed. When I went to put my letter in the post I just chose to send it “normal” post. I didn’t think registered mail was needed; it was just a letter! Call me a bit of a Fagin, but forking out lots of money just so I can track my letter seems a bit…unnecessary.

But this time it was. Necessary, I mean. The letter hasn’t turned up and I’m left wondering what’s happened to it. My friend is, too.

How does post “get lost” anyway? I’m off to find out what happens to post once you post it.

Well, I’ve found this video on YouTube. It’s relatively interesting considering the subject matter. The only trouble is, I don’t actually live all that far from my friend so my letter doesn’t involve quite so much moving about as it would travelling to the Scottish Highlands. So how come my little envelope has been lost? I find it hard to believe Royal Mail have places where mail can slip unnoticed, like “falling behind the dresser”.

The moral of this story? Always pay extra for recorded mail!


Task Twelve: The Name of the Game

Gosh, it’s really raining today. Not just a little light drizzle, but a proper, full-on bucketing down. The only thing that’s lacking is a thunderstorm. What’s the point of it raining so beautifully if you don’t have some lovely loud crashes for added atmosphere? Thanks to the rain, I haven’t taken my laptop out to Starbucks for some writing time. Instead, I drove to the local supermarket that has a Starbucks and got myself a takeout. So I’m home, drinking my vanilla latte and thinking about the lack of rainy-day atmosphere.

Anyway, onto today’s task! It’s all about finding fitting names for your characters and involves a game that everyone can play, even you at home! Take a piece of paper and draw a line lengthways down the middle to make two columns. Now, think of the names of people you know or have heard of and put the first name in the left column and the last name in the right column. Then cut the paper in half and hey presto! You have an instant selection of names to choose from and can work on putting different ones together that sound just right for one of your characters.

For my own book, The Sillow Orb, I chose a name for my main character that is a part of me. Marissa is a name my parents thought about when choosing my own name. Boddington is a family name. So her name came into existence very easily and I really feel as though I have an affinity with her. Other characters in my books are named after people I am friends with, not because they are particularly like that character, but I find it helps to ground my characters in some sense of familiarity so they don’t feel like complete strangers!

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Here are my two lists, with first and last names chosen for no real reason and written in no particular order!

Andrea                                         Barnes

Graham                                        Hewson

Lauren                                          Hinds

Lynne                                           Banes

Malcolm                                      Kay

Joanna                                         Hankin

Naomi                                          Madsen

Ellie                                               Hinchliffe

Shannon                                      Rivett

Anita                                             Steinkamp

Louise                                           Roberts

Tierah                                           Sentance

Leanne                                          Olding

May                                               Ferguson

Linda                                             Steffen

I quite like the sound of some of these mixed-up names! How about Linda Olding? Or Malcolm Kay sounds like an interesting guy! May Madsen sounds like her story is just waiting to be told.

So have some fun with names today!

(Tasks are taken from The Five-Minute Writer by Margret Geraghty.)